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16/10/2017
In Whangarei
Last week me and my mum and aunty and dad went to Whangarei. First we dropped my dad off to the rugby field with his mates and my uncle Sam. Then me and my mum and aunty went to go book our hotel. Our door had a number 5 on it. Next we went back to the rugby game. It started. Then all of us said, “Dad and Uncle Sam Go!” But they lost. Then we went to the pools and I was the only one that went for a cold swim in the pool. I said to my mum, “Look at this big as bomb.” It was louder than a drum. I saw Penaia at the pools too. He was sitting on the seat. Then I got out of the pool and we left the pools. We went back to the hotel and then my dad and uncle came to the hotel and Uncle Sam said, “Can I stay at your hotel please?” We all said, “Yes.” Next I had a bath and it was a spa bath. It had heaps of bubbles and it was super fun. I had a great time. Not long after that we went to sleep.
We had a good time at the hotel. The next morning we all had breakfast. Our breakfast was hotcakes and the hotcakes were super yummy.
I had an awesome time in Whangarei.
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