Recount Writing-I went to the Park.

WALT add details to help our readers understand our story.

I also added interesting words, talking, and feelings and thoughts.

I went to the park.

On Monday afternoon me and my family went to the park in Kaikohe to have fun. I felt excited.

When we got to the park we saw a swing. I said to myself, “What should I go on?”

The first thing I did at the park was I went on the slide.

Next  I went on the swing. I said, “That was excellent.” It felt amazing because the swing went high.

After that we went home. I felt amazed and excellent.

Recount Writing-At Kelly Tarlton's

I am learning to add details to help my readers understand my story.

At Kelly Tarlton’s

On Sunday my family and I went to Kelly Tarlton’s to see the fun fish.

We went there because everyone did not want to stay at home except my dad because he wanted to work.

When we got to Auckland first we had to get our key to our hotel room.

Next we went to Kelly Tarlton’s. The first thing I went to look at were the penguins. They were swimming fast. They did big bombs when they splashed into the water. They were amazing.

Next I looked at the fish. There were lots of different coloured fish. I watched them through the glass.

Then when I saw the jellyfish I was amazed because they were so big. I said, “Whoa!”

Kelly Tarlton’s is outstanding. I enjoyed my visit.