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Friday, March 31, 2017

Google Draw Poster-Healthy Eating

Persuasive Writing-Healthy Eating.

WALT write our opinion and our reasons.
30/03/17
Healthy food
I think we should eat healthy food.
Firstly I think we should eat healthy food because we can see better. Healthy makes our eyes healthy.
Secondly I think we should eat healthy food because it helps our skin to be healthy.
Another reason we should eat healthy food is because our brain will  grow strong.
Lastly I think we should eat healthy food because our body will be in tip top gear.
So I think we should eat healthy food.

Sunday, March 26, 2017

Recount Writing - Action World


I am learning to add my thoughts and feelings in my writing.
20/03/17
Action World
On Sunday afternoon I went to Action World with my brother and dad. It was cool.
First I went on the big water slide.
After that we went on the Bouncy castle. It was fun. Finally we went home and we did our work on the farm. We fed the dogs
Then we fed the pigs.

I had a great day.

Thursday, March 16, 2017

Persuasive Writing - Rules at School.

I am learning to write my opinion and add my reasons.

14/03/17

Rules at School
I think we should have rules at school.
Firstly I think we should have rules at school because we will be safe.
Secondly I think we should have rules at
school because no one will get hurt.
Another reason I think we should
have rules at school is because
then people will be happy.
Lastly I  thInk we should have rules at school because then we will be a good school.

So I thInk we should have rules at school.

Monday, March 13, 2017

Recount Writing


I am learning to write my ideas in order.
13/03/17
At the falls.
On Sunday afternoon we went to the falls.
The water was high and it was going fast.
I was scared of the flood.
After that we went home to have lunch.

Saturday, March 11, 2017

Persuasive Writing

I am learning to write my opinion and add reasons.
03/03/17
It is wrong to fight
I think it is wrong to fight
Firstly I think it is wrong to fight because somebody will yell and scream.
Secondly I think it is wrong to fight because someone will get hurt.
Lastly I think it is wrong to fight because someone will punch and hurt others.
So I think it is wrong to fight.  

Recount Writing

Wednesday, March 8, 2017

This is my first story for my blog.

I am learning to write my opinion and my reasons. 
28/02/17
I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school. 
Firstly I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school because everyone will look after each other and we can be happy and safe. 
Second I think we should be a bucket filling school because more people will come to our school when they hear that it is a safe place. 
Another reason I think Tautoro school should be a bucket filling school is because there will be no bullying. So I think Tautoro school should be a bucket filling School.