Persuasive Writing.

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18.10.2017

We should do homework every night

I think we should do homework every night

Firstly I think we should do homework every night so we can achieve our learning  goals because we practice our learning.

Secondly I think we should do homework every night so we can get smarter.

Another reason why I think we should do homework every night is so we can give our brain a workout.

Lastly I think we should do homework every night so we can have one by one time with our mum and dad.

So that’s why I think we should do homework every night.

Persuasive Writing.

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19.10.20

We should play sports every day.

I think we should play Sport every day.

Firstly I think we should play sport every day so we can get fitter.

Secondly I think we should play Sport every day so we can learn how to work with a team.

Another reason why I think we should play sport  every day is so we can learn excellent skills like kicking, bouncing and passing the ball properly.   

Lastly I think we should play Sport every day so we can get some fresh air.

So that’s why I think we should play sport every day.

Recount Writing-In Whangarei

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16/10/2017

In Whangarei

Last week me and my mum and aunty and dad went to Whangarei. First we dropped my dad off to  the rugby field with his mates and my uncle Sam. Then me and my mum and aunty went to go book our hotel. Our door had a number 5 on it.  Next we went back to the rugby game. It started. Then all of us said, “Dad and Uncle Sam Go!” But they lost. Then we went to the pools and I was the only one that went for a  cold swim in the pool.  I said to my mum, “Look at this big as bomb.” It was louder than a drum. I saw Penaia at the pools too. He was sitting on the seat. Then I got out of the pool and we left the pools. We went back to the hotel and  then my dad and uncle came to the hotel and Uncle Sam said, “Can I stay at your hotel please?” We all said, “Yes.” Next I had a bath  and it was a spa bath. It had heaps of bubbles and it was super fun. I had a great time. Not long after that we went to sleep.

We had a good time at the hotel. The next morning we all had breakfast. Our breakfast was hotcakes and the hotcakes were super yummy.  

I had an awesome time in Whangarei.