Persuasive Writing: We should drink water every day.

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We should drink water every day

I think we should drink water every day

Firstly I think we should drink water every day so our body and mouth doesn't get dry.

Secondly I think we should drink water every day because it sends all the healthy nutrients that are in the food you eat, all around your body.

Another reason why I think we should drink water every day is because when we wee, cry and sweat and spit, we lose water, so we have to fill it back up again.

Lastly I think we should drink water every day because we can stay at the right temperature especially when it is  hot.

So that’s why I think we should drink water every day.

Persuasive Writing-Kapahaka is important to learn.

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20/09/17

Kapahaka is important to learn.

I think that kapahaka is important to learn.

First I think kapahaka is important because you learn to sing in time and in tune.

Secondly I think kapahaka is important because it connects you with your tupana so we can keep learning the songs and actions and we will never forget them.

Another reason why I think kapahaka is important is because we learn to keep in beat when we are doing the actions and waewae takahia.

Lastly I think kapahaka is important because we learn lots different songs and actions.

So that’s why I think kapahaka is important.

Look at the Taonga I made for my Dad.

Happy Father's Day, Dad.

Addition basic facts practice

I have been practicing my addition basic facts. I wanted to get more faster and more accurate. When I started this week my top score was 20. Today I scored 45. Here are my results.

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