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I went to the park.
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On Monday afternoon me and my family went to the park in Kaikohe to have fun. I felt excited.
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When we got to the park we saw a swing.
I said to myself, “What should I go on?”
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The first thing I did at the park was I went on the slide.
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Next I went on the swing.
I said, “That was excellent.”
It felt amazing because the swing went high.
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After that we went home.
I felt amazed and excellent.
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